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Old 10-07-06, 01:47 PM   #13
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Te Ora

i used a fake personal last week.. your still worse than me mate
but it's ironic.. cause i consider you, personally, fake

Cool opener.

'cause you aren't a gankstuh. you'll lose, what i'm spittin shocks
and considering your not a g i’ll prove i got shit on lock

ok.

you must be hood. a ghetto cat with a hobby for guns
if your real gully.. it's fitting i leave your body in one

Good.

it's time to run. you ain't seeing none you just lying son
in all likelyhood.. you've never stepped foot inside of one

Good wordplay.

you don't fire gats and should be giving up on these claims
getting mentioned in the mag..
was the closest you've come to living up to your name

Cool nameplay.

and i read the predictions. apparently you'll come 1st & defeat
i agree that you'll be in contendorship.. for wackest verse of the week

lol, good.

i'm airing you out.. when the flights over you gon here the sound
of everyone saying "roger that" dude flying to the ground

Clever nameplay.

i fuck bitches homie, your just into scouting men
most RG's guard against sacks - your known to welcome them.

lol, good nameplay closer.

Overall: Nice verse. Very consistent, only had may be one line I wasn't feeling, everything else was good.

Roger Glocks

U wrote that shit quick as hell n I read that shit coughing, very awkard
If this how gay a Te' Key gets...then Barber needs to come out closet

Cool nameplay opener.

I know you act hard. talk shit about me, but i get pussy often
while girls are like a unsolved cases to u...he cant put his finger on it

Good.

with ya generic punches and bullshit personals. it gets boring to read
cuz ppl only feel wut your saying. if they touched the monitor screen

Good.

ur ugly ass cant hold on to a girl, its funny how hard you wanna be
....tryin to be a mack when Te gets dumped more then Boston party

Cool nameplay.

I kept on reading.juss shook my head, if u thought you were leading
my punches will let you go first, then have your headstart...bleeding

Nice.

bullets, shells, clips....gun talk is playeddd I know it should be dead
.. ^^ but all this sounds catchy ? dont worry it'll get stuck in ur head

Nice.

hang youself. slit ur wrist. swallow pills...kill yourself I dont care
but if ur shooting for the top...that won't work cuz U wont be there

Cool.

i know your gay. act like you want pussy but'll u'll search for cock
when it comes to chicks .......well Te' Bags (~~ he gets that alot

ha, good nameplay closer.


Overall: Nice verse as well. Was barely more consistent and a couple of the best lines in the battle, real close.


Vote: Roger Glocks - Close battle. At first I thought Te Ora would get it, but then I read Roger's verse and it was equally as good. What edged him the victory was him being slightly more consistent, other than that, this was too close to call.
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