Your flow, reminds me of me on a song I did called "Dear Lord".
The beat is sad, like Rey said, but it's pretty nice for emotion. The intro does need to be more coherent, and the vocals could be turned up a little, to give it a more emotional feel.
But flow is on point, i think the hook could be a little more, or even a little less to add to the simplicity of the feeling of emotions. Just to make it pop out more. Flow is kinda sketchy on the second verse. Like your forcing yourself to stay on beat. Which gives you a kinda Strained feel.
But overall its a pretty good song, I like it.
8/10
RTF. Please.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235654