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Old 10-07-06, 11:45 PM   #19
John Hensley.
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You climbed to the top, but I dont give a damn what you've achieved
Get sent back down da mountain like U got 10 commandments for da league
cool
got me peeved, detective work in text battles is lame to do
the way you butcher other peoples quotes
.................David Lama would be ashamed of you
eh, not bad
Mr. line quoting fag fake mod, its time I check you
Im FROM this site trus...you only here because YOURS dont respect you
it was personal, a bit too bland to be dope tho
I remember you was pet, too...so be easy and take a breather
and Com down bitch you probably cant beat his ass neither
nah
In every league you wack and slow, the facts'll show
1-2 was YOUR idea...yet you was one of the first cats to go
pretty good

tavarez102882: just came back from a baby shower in NYC.......mad ass up there son im still tryna get over it
DaTrusHurtz: haha, that's awesome, but wait who ya callin' son?
tavarez102882: lol thats NY lingo, im still in Bronx Mode
DaTrusHurtz: word, i hear ya, i just always confront people when they call me son and i'm like uh... am i older than you?

Bitches get sensitive........... you know how that goes
So I'll take it back, Trus you aint my son
..............I could never father such a wack flow
i thought this was a solid personal and nice use of the convo, but could have been a much harder hitter
Maybe i should apologize to DaTrus... if disrespect is what I did
But I'd be telling Foleys big enough to match the one molesting kids
nah
This kid is fake cant equate, see him viciously ate
Could pimp a state...how U fuck with Dakota bitches and snakes
nah
So its no need to wonder if your lacking a hoe...
U dont drop ya Datelines, U da pedophile they catch on the show
not bad not good
CALL ME A FLUKE, i battled Mim, Butler, Shakes...never went fronting
U champ a shell of the LBL, I held the belt when it fucking meant something
i really liked this flow alot, the way it was worded made this sound pretty good
They all left, Merc signed out, Brock was tired of typing rhymes
U proved even BUMS can win in this league....signed in at the right time
nah
Should try winning on OTHER sites...make a few friends w/ some chumps
Cuz you aint the One, Da.....And Halloween aint til the end of the month
eh, alright

alright tav, i usually like your shit cuz it's mad witty and can be really fresh, but i dont know dude, this wasnt you this time. it wasnt bad, but you had alot of personal type lines that were just too bland and not really worded that well to make up for it, except for the shell of the LBL line which had a real dope flow. i liked your opening lines, but you kinda went downhill from there. no disrespect of course, i think ur one of the doper heads on here, but this isn't the shit i usually read from you.


Now Nelson...
I've herd ur a spic, an iraqi, i know this is upsetting ya dude
U've been mistaken for so many races, I won a parlay betting on you
pretty good
U won't defeat me, n' my college classes have pleased me
Cuz I got the TA I've always wanted...
... the kind thats really easy
lol, thsi was aight
I been facin' the best weekly, n' at best ur a bitch
I've seen the area of dope... n' ur perimeter is less than a inch
ok
BITCH YOU DON'T HURT, N' UR A JUST SAD FAG WITH A VERSE
Oh sorry, that came out the wrong way... kinda like ur birth
ehh
Ur mad borin', you could fix that, and man it would seem
U have so little Witten u, ya tried signin' him to ya fantasy team
havent seen a flip on his name, not real dope but pretty good
Ur ugly, but I'm ownin' shit, so word to ya momma
I have Braggin Writes...
... you just have a fat bitch that looks like a Lama
lol
Ur a fake champ, but a real cheater, we all laugh at this queer
"Beating" Shake fueled such a controversy, it gave u gas for a year!
shoulda used this personal another way, ok though

DaTrusHurtz: what do you think about quality of heads in the 1-2? Should there be a higher bar about who is let in or just let average heads in and let them elevate in the league
tavarez102882: i think in the beggining you should let them in and eliminate the weaker ones as the season progresses
tavarez102882: give them the chance to improve and if they dont, get em out

That was the interview we've seen, ur ideas were helpful to me
But why the FUCK would u propose an idea to kick u out of the league?
pretty good use of that, i liked this punch more than tavs quote one
Ya got no friends, no job, ur an ugly sight in this rap
U woodwork... n' ya verse looks like it came right outta that
kinda bad wording, ok line
Hate vote this, d/r that, but ya know what the worst is
These days I don't know why people even vote...
... for ANY of ur verses
nah, wayyy too simple
The league is weaker, but fag ur not commanding when roaming
You represent the state of text... while standin' up in Wyoming
nah
I can diss you, ur a bitch dude, but I'm agreein' on truth, see
You were still the champ...
... by bein' dickrode and beatin' a newbie
alright

man your guys' verses are really alike, both used quotes, both got some state lines and both got some bland personals lol. DTH i thought you dropped real nice last week, this week you dropped down a couple levels, it wasn't bad of course, i liked parts of the verse, but parts i didnt like.


overall pretty good battle, i'm not really sure who to vote for. ok i just re-read the battle as a whole, and i honestly felt Tav just i dont know bro, some of those signing in at the right time lines and the dakota lines just werent good man. DTH, i liked a few of your opening lines, u started off pretty solid, i liked your quote line more than tav's, i thought the ''dont know why any people vote'' line was wack tho homie. wyoning too. closer was ok, worded solid so that helped. damn man, i dont know, i think i got DTH here, i was thinkin Tav was gonna take the title when i saw this matchup but he didnt drop his usual shit.
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