i dunno if i like the beat that much...just not really my type of beat...

your SS's are kinda loud...maybe the EQ on the track...

your delivery of course is nice.......the story is pretty nice...i think it woulda been nicer had u put in another verse for us to listen to...maybe added a lil more to the story instead of ending it so abruptly........overall not bad..not much i can pick out with 1 verse.......it was a nice listen...nothin i would DL and bump in the whip tons or anything..but it was nice....keep it up....

o and RTF please on Whatever You Want with Me, Trip, and black magik

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