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Old 10-08-06, 05:20 PM   #12
.Ike.
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returning the favor...

i like the intro......its coo

im listening through labtop speakers...so as far as levels go...i cant be too sure....seems like your verse kinda drowns out the beat though........maybe a bit loud..im not sure....delivery is getting better....

the hook seems to be mixed better...flow falls just a tad bit during one lil part of it....

2nd verse seems to be mixed better as well......at a better level anyways...flow falls a lil bit.....something u need to work on......good voice...has really good potential....gotta work on delivery some too.......lyrics are pretty good........


3rd verse...para..your shit is coo on this....other dudes flow falls more.......

overall not a bad track....not something i would DL and bump in the whip...but it was a good listen......def. worth it.......you def keep getting better man..just keep working.....

appreciate the feed on my track as well.....thanks
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