i like the guitar work in the beginning. definitely cool. beat is pretty cool. real laid back. good job with that.

first up triple..your flow is on point here. but for some reason i dont like the way your voice sounds on this. at certain times you sound kinda fake or corny. but overall this is pretty cool.

hook - dont like you on the chorus. your off on the hook so it throws it off a little. the adlibs with ike are cool. chorus isnt that bad.

2nd verse - ok thats cool. your verse sounds real cool. your voice definitely fits this song real well. lyrics are cool. flow is simple but it worked

hook the same

3rd verse - ike you did a good job on this. i like your flow the best. you switch it up a lot and makes it more interesting. i like how the beat breaks down on your verse. real cool.


overall this song was good. the only thing i didnt like was the hook. but it was still a cool song..