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Old 10-09-06, 08:28 PM   #6
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i was feel this drop alot shawty, you came on some real talk, the flow was on point and you had some good multies in there. the only thing i would suggest is to seperate the drop into more than just one long verse.

Plus soon I’m gonna die, cause Pat shot a lung of mine
But I wont stop breathing ‘til I go back to what was of time

That was one of my favorite bars

hit me up on my joints....................be easy
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