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Old 10-09-06, 11:58 PM   #14
Paul Cain
Flyweight
 
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son dis was ight, but theres some ish i suggest you work on ya dig? some of your lines wasn't hittin that hot, but some were good. your flow just seems like its off someparts. thats what i would focus on. i see you got some punches and just work on ya wordplay. but you off to a good start mah dude. keep doin you...1...

hit me back on my shit...........SO destructive, or Cartely Boyz.......
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