para- yeah, like prahject said, it was less monitone, doppest i heard from u... second verse addlibs pretty cool... "call me a jerk" didn't like how u said that sounded corney
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chorus- might be a lil quiet, but im diggin, could us like a better reverb echo thang to make it catchier.
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young red- fell off a bit... need to really ennunciate your rhyming words and dub 'em or w/e... decent thought, like ya style ya pressance just aint there yet

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