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a cum line? nah... but i like the flow i can actually catch ya lyrics, stay on flow good, i like the muti sylible rhymes... u sound like u need to raise your highs in your EQ's. chorus is str8 the way it is, im diggin it, a few adlibs in it prolly would make it a lil hyper. good mixin wit the beggin and endings... pretty decent. werd... and thnx for the feed in my thread, i like how u actually gave chritism instead of nut huggin, werd.... ya need a lil more ups and downs and switch a flow a lil to make it more appealin and less monitone, good shit for what your goin for i guess, not my style but werd

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