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Old 10-11-06, 03:18 PM   #1
Eastsyde
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i couldn't picture hearing this track in the club...the energy lacks....the lyrics are good for what it was made for.....the hook lags.....i'd up the emotion that's what's really ruining the track....the second cat had good flow and a lil better emotion but all the verses sounded the same lyrically and emotionally....keep workin at it 6/10
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