lol at da intro Pulp Fiction..........

Para - ya quality could be up like eq ya shit........um flow is strate a lil slow but it's on point.....tellina story aiite........

Hook - aiite gets ya point across yea reppin ya city.......

Yung Red - yo ya flow is there, but ya delivery is really not there....sounds like mase....and ya flow falls off a lil bit.......quality could be upped too

Hook - same as above

Both ya'll - "toxication among the city" ya rushed dat line...........yo both yall's flow is really off on this last verse........

overall - fix the flow....i mean juss count syllables and pack in more where needed so u don't have to stretch out words........

aiite.....

pz

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