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Old 10-12-06, 07:12 AM   #14
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verse 1..nice flow..delivery is there,ur vocals are just at point with the volume and shit...lyrics are there!...


hook...was iight


verse 2 : i liked this rhymes scheme more..sounds familiar!*scrolls up*...ah its breezy..flow was steady but too monotonous!...ah he aint a member here

verse 3..shud have turned up his vocals a lil..delivery aint there mayne..quality is.....okay..yeah manageable!

Personal opinion : ...commenting on the beat WITHOUT considering the topic....its ok a0part from the lil fact that the piano was toodamn high formy liking..but with the 'Get Ur Crunk On' no matter what u do some1 expects some bass and shit..noise and stuff...idk..it was different from what i expected..i'd give this a 7/10..just becos the rappers made it worth listening to!..yup!
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