i agree with Q i was really feelin the intro.....first verse was ight lyrics should prolly should be stepped up a tad but they bad....the lil singing at the beginning added some good flavor to it....flow should be sped up just a little bit.....the hook really goes with the beat well....i like it...second verse is a little bit better flow wise lyrics are pretty much the same just step it up a little bit...a little more emotion would also help ya too....beat is tight too...really goes with the concept....overall 7/10....
rtf please
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