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Old 10-13-06, 10:21 AM   #14
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And ya girl loves ta fuck me, she's never gettin fed-up
So i'll give ya girl a bone like...
AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
Fucka fake personal after see'in that please disregard my earlier set up!
I aint likin' this dame, cuz she's frightenin' but hey
With that light bulb nose i'm sure she really brightens ya day
But c'mon dawg, that's and ugly bitch, i'm smashin' wit blows
Her cone shaped chin could stop traffic on roads
She lets freaks ride her, whore, that's what she's handy for
Bitch has enough gum ontop of her teeth to open a candy store
You shy now? Dun' worry I also take what I can get whenever I browse
And i'm sure she really floats ya boat with those paddle lookin eyebrowse
Though she got some style, and it's best you guys learn
That she's rockin blue suede shoes, to go along with those Elvis side burns
But even your girl ignores ya, I doubt she's takin your time
The only way'd you'd get a lap dance is by shakin your thighs
I'm whoring kids, your features don't suit you, watch me wreck this
Those beady fucking eyes'd only look decent on a necklace

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25 fuckin' battles? Ur not a threat, queer
Neil Armstrong coulda went to the moon in the time it took u to get here
LMAO @ that, n' there's no way this whore's clever
Ur rank's like a tracin' a fruitloop...
... it just seems to go in circles forever
Now Kemp writes great mags, but ur still a lame fuck
But u got a top punch 2 weeks in a row...
... too bad it was the same punch!
Fags got no where to run to, my league's talent has done grew,
In fact, I saw a work of Art...
... knock u outta playoffs in 1-2
I'll set this shit straight, u rip lines from Resin n' greats,
Ur so under the influence, ur verses wobble all over the place
U can't outwrite me, ur fucked, just get ready to hurl geek
Ur in such a big hole, it was prolly dug by the mole on ya girl's cheek
U been talkin' a big game, but u just ain't shit turd
I got a hot bitch...
... u go out with a girl version of big bird!
She ain't stable, n' this whore's been given a label
Of havin' so many elements of ugly, she could form a periodic table
I glanced at ur girl's bed, n' that bitch's yellin' in grieve
Cuz she bought a comforter... just to fuckin' tell u to Leave!
You were in love with the hoe, but now your spark is gone
U guys have so little chemistry, ya girl put safety goggles on
See I'm rippin' these queers, ya hoe's been consumin' some tears
With such fuckin' bug eyes, she could feed Timon and Pumbaa for years

This was a close battle... very good... a little long with the whole 60 lines each... i dont want to read that many in one single battle for awhile after this.

Jack- Your verse was pretty consisatn for the most part... your first verse was alright nothing real speical in there just some okay punches nothing too wowing... then you picked it up while dissin the picture of his girl and had some strong punches in there aswell as some wit... then came the third one where you really started to pick up but was it to late?

DTH- Your verse was pretty concsitan aswell.. You started off nice with pickin at his HOF rep and some other punches that connected... following up with dissin the pic of him... some okay lines and some nice ones... you then went on to diss his girl and that shit was really funny... i myself thought of some simalr lines before you guys dropped and as glad to see that i wasnt the only one thinking that shit..

Anywyas this was a very close battle had to judge

But im going to have to go with

Vote=DTH ...
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P.S. to see who i voted for.. highlight between the = and ...'s

RTF on me and spul
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