I'll put cha face in the dirt...i'm rapein this pussy, bitch pull up ya skirt/
this shit is the worst..but you a herb and i'm not, yes, The Truth really Hurts/
eh i get what you saying here even withou the explantations but the punch wsnt really delivered that hard so it made for a meh punch
you battlin a vet..you aint posin a threat...there's no way you can have this win/
it seem like every time i turn around you in a battle or votin for the person you battlin!/
eh didnt realy like this.. wording was bad n the punch aint really connect/ aint make to much sence
fuckin pus, this shit ain't a game, your elementary style you should be ashamed/
from the simple metaphors to the outrageous play in ya name/
This was alright... alot better then the other two punches so far
if that is wordplay than playing wit words is somethin that i don't wanna do/
let me drop down so i can be on the same level as you/
eh okay concept but your wording made it not connect really... set up was iight punch was eh
you win by no-shows, you won't go far after my verse busta/
tryin to be cool by votin for your opponent its obvious D.S. is a Dick Sucka/
this was coo.

Iigh theres your feed hope it helps ya out man... you just need to elevate a bit and you'll be all set..

Hit up my battle with that indian dude spul

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