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Old 10-13-06, 11:01 AM   #16
R. Lingo
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Kid ya dirty so watch ya hygene or you'll end up dead
C'mon honestly man, is that a hat or something growin out ya head
ehh to simple, could of worded it better to make it harsher
Kids a gay.. and ill prove it as i break his fuckin hips
This kid dont suck tits.. he just forever suckin on his lips
again, too simple
And yeah kid in this battle its on you that im smellin fear
N the onlything bigger then DTH winnin streak... is your left ear
nah, maybe with some wordplay or someting to make it harsher it'd be coo
You get girls... huh who you kiddin, your face crusty like whoa
N the only time you get your freak on... is openin up a sideshow
ehh decent
Ima land so much punches on you, be prepared to take flight
Cause spul verse is like his barber...he cant line em up right
ha not bad, this was pretty coo
This kids a hindu fag... so go back to fuckin animal in your stall
N ill leave your face croocked like the frame hangin on your wall
blah, too simple, not harsh enough
Lampejo fear this hoe? No... we know you only appearin dope
And I'll say congratulations on that tourny... from two years ago
ehh kind of weak seeing as he won a second one early this yr. so fake personal really
Wack rhymes never comin up..they all beat up on the floor,why?
Cuz ya whole styles dragon...and it doesn't bring fire... ...or fly
ehh, wording was off
Despise this fag? Nah...just lookin at ya pics enuff to realize ya wack
..And you look a hell of alot like T.I....except T.I.'s black
ehh what are you saying? SPuL is half black or something I thought? but ehh
N kid's say i played you like zelda the way i box you around
while i take this look alike linkin park his ass underground
decent
Kid i dont know why you requested this battle, its not like its fair
N your ass could only bring the pain if it pays you cab fare
ok

Decent verse at best. Had a lot of shit that could of worked, but struggled with wording. The line em up right was actually cool line. But other than that really wasn't likin' much of it.

Flip the picture upside down cuz those nostril's are alarmin'
And you'll find a replica of the hole, the US found Saddam in
haha this was nice
I'm doper then you, kid. I hate to sound nonchalent
But you're wack, F plus..
.. that's what ^^ your rhymes are graded in talent
ehh. one letter nameplays are real ehh so didn't like this too much
Fall back, kid, now listen, I'm serving knuckles for your lunches
So if you are what you eat.. check flash's next verse for my punches
not bad
You're wack, you ain't gon win this league. I ain't playin' dude
So don't bother to peace out the puzzle..
... just realize thats ^^^^^^^^ that's what they sayin' to you
nah this wasn't good
Ain't no time for kiddy games, son... ain't got no time to waste
So while you rock, paper, scissors... I'll just throw them at your face
ehhh
22 lines? shit, 16 was more my taste
I wanted to dumb it down a bit...
... but your verse beat me to the chase
cool, decent
Flash is like a doulble-headed coin, bring either one, you kno I'll rip them
I'm sorry, am I on your bad side? I couldn't tell the difference
ehhish
I'll call your face my punching bag, I'm vicious. Fuck being humble
I'll send such a huge blow to your temple...
... the ones in India'll start to crumble
pretty cool

Even though you went fewer lines i feel you were more consistent. Not that great a verse here tho. Just more consistent than flash. But it was decent at best.

Overall, this was ehh battle to me. Both didn't come that great, flash had one line that was coo, and SPuL had 2 or 3. He was also a lil more consistent than Flash. this my honest opinion so don't any of you bitch if you think my breakdowns were harsh. but ehh SPuL got this

v/SPuL
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