ya styles weak...ppl are gon wittness a slaughter fail
an see this bitch leave more half-off...than a furniture sale
ya aint gangsta,now lbl gotta real bitch on our hands
Threatened to pull his semi,
.......dude please keep ya dick in ya pants
i'ma knock you out here...then take you on ya own truff
didn’t wana hold your ground...but still got left huggin the Earth
ya in the paper, thats the day i popoff at all the wack dudes
editors'll have nuthin to do wit a...bulletin the top of bad news
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ya disgustin as shit, 'n not bringin the heat raw, bruh
ur so gross, this is one Trey i wouldn't wanna eat off of
yea i wanted to drop early cuz ur an impitent, grimey bitch
cuz the early bird gets the worm.. so u better be hidin ya tiny dick
ur chick'll suck my BIG dick, but i wouldn't be willin to pound that
i'll leave ya bitch lookin cockeyed.. since thats where my dick'll come out at
plus i get mad cake, so hoes love me while they hatin this bitch
while all u'll be able to get is shortbread.. like a fuckin bakery dish
i'm a be sure to cap this fool, cuz this failures tasteless
so u'll think i was an addict how i shoot meth up on a daily basis
^LMAO i liked this except i seen it before thats the only reason i aint qoute this.
Well i got it tied with 8 quotables so im gunn have to think about it for a minute and read them over again.
Untold. Your verse was good ten out of your fourteen lines where good and qoutable but i couldnt qoute the one i stated above cause i've seen it before so that took the direct win away right there. Your punches was funny and concected very well... shit even made me laugh in some places. Your flow was good and you whole verse was very solid and consistant.. very good job
Trey. Your verse was also good you had eight outa your fourteen lines that was quotables and they connected fairly welll for the most part. Your structure seemed a bit construed but structure doesnt really matter unless its topicals aslong as it isnt strecerdh like whoa... Yoour punches hit for the most part and your verse was solid aswell. good job
This was a closer battle then most probably will think..
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Good battle again to boht of you...
if ytou could return the favor on mine and spul's battle would be appriciated.