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Old 10-13-06, 02:05 PM   #17
KempoMRK
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spul thinks he's cut out for this, but a opperation aint saving this basterd
n besides your child birth.. what came from this c-section is even wacker
wordplay was aight, but I have no clue how this relates to Spul
spul alway's goes hard, but n my eyes he's more of a wanksta cuz..
that hand gun your holding.. 's really killing your gangsta buzz
I thought this was awful. The wording killed it, shoulda changed it up completely

He always has to explain his punches, it's lame when shorty raps
Heads never get where he's comin from.. which explains the corny hat
I liked this. worded nicely and just a good punch
I'll make him lose his girl, his dignity, this match. You know I'm the shit
the way I'm putting A thru L's...
... the other 14 letters'll will throw a fit
eh, wasn't feeling this at all. alphabet type punches are played and this didn't work

I thought Spul got this for his hat punch. I really didn't get Art's verse at all. The first bar was worded weakly, setup shoulda been better. And the second bar was just weak. So yeah I got Spul taking this for his first punch basically.

v/ SPuL

EDIT: this isn't a sway, but since if philly were to explain his punch, it might be considered one, i'll explain it. kemp, for his first punch, what he was referin to was the fact Spul came from section/group C when the league was first made. just wanted to clear that up and btw, i would do the same if it was needed for Spul.
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