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Old 10-13-06, 04:52 PM   #20
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Kid ya dirty so watch ya hygene or you'll end up dead
C'mon honestly man, is that a hat or something growin out ya head
lol, this was "ok"
Kids a gay.. and ill prove it as i break his fuckin hips
This kid dont suck tits.. he just forever suckin on his lips
Ya, I used a bar like this so much better in KORV and no one quoted it, -_-
And yeah kid in this battle its on you that im smellin fear
N the onlything bigger then DTH winnin streak... is your left ear
lol, you coulda made this soooo much better though
You get girls... huh who you kiddin, your face crusty like whoa
N the only time you get your freak on... is openin up a sideshow
LOL! man that's the only good punch so far but you coulda made this better too
Ima land so much punches on you, be prepared to take flight
Cause spul verse is like his barber...he cant line em up right
nah, wack
This kids a hindu fag... so go back to fuckin animal in your stall
N ill leave your face croocked like the frame hangin on your wall
eh, ok
Lampejo fear this hoe? No... we know you only appearin dope
And I'll say congratulations on that tourny... from two years ago
LOL! Fucking sick i aint never seen a bar used like this
Wack rhymes never comin up..they all beat up on the floor,why?
Cuz ya whole styles dragon...and it doesn't bring fire... ...or fly
nah, PLAYED
Despise this fag? Nah...just lookin at ya pics enuff to realize ya wack
..And you look a hell of alot like T.I....except T.I.'s black
LOL!K!NK This was sick too, nice personal
N kid's say i played you like zelda the way i box you around
while i take this look alike linkin park his ass underground
nah, forced, and not even good
Kid i dont know why you requested this battle, its not like its fair
N your ass could only bring the pain if it pays you cab fare
nah, wack also

You get girls... huh who you kiddin, your face crusty like whoa
N the only time you get your freak on... is openin up a sideshow
Lampejo fear this hoe? No... we know you only appearin dope
And I'll say congratulations on that tourny... from two years ago
Despise this fag? Nah...just lookin at ya pics enuff to realize ya wack
..And you look a hell of alot like T.I....except T.I.'s black
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Flip the picture upside down cuz those nostril's are alarmin'
And you'll find a replica of the hole, the US found Saddam in
lol, coo concept but the wording was wacked
I'm doper then you, kid. I hate to sound nonchalent
But you're wack, F plus..
.. that's what ^^ your rhymes are graded in talent
LOL stupid... it's CHALANT, and it's pronounced SHA-LAWNT so it didn't rhyme, but this was still cool
Fall back, kid, now listen, I'm serving knuckles for your lunches
So if you are what you eat.. check flash's next verse for my punches
this was coo
You're wack, you ain't gon win this league. I ain't playin' dude
So don't bother to peace out the puzzle..
... just realize thats ^^^^^^^^ that's what they sayin' to you
omg, you coulda worded this concept so much better, but it's wack like this
Ain't no time for kiddy games, son... ain't got no time to waste
So while you rock, paper, scissors... I'll just throw them at your face
lol, simple but cool
22 lines? shit, 16 was more my taste
I wanted to dumb it down a bit...
... but your verse beat me to the chase
LOL, sweet.. aint seen this wordplay used yet
Flash is like a doulble-headed coin, bring either one, you kno I'll rip them
I'm sorry, am I on your bad side? I couldn't tell the difference
waaaaaaaaack
I'll call your face my punching bag, I'm vicious. Fuck being humble
I'll send such a huge blow to your temple...
... the ones in India'll start to crumble
LOL! you know how much better it woulda been if you flipped him calling you indian? like wow, said something like "So you wanna say i'm indian, fuck being humble, i'll hit ya temple so hard the ones my familly pray in will crumble" as an example...

Flip the picture upside down cuz those nostril's are alarmin'
And you'll find a replica of the hole, the US found Saddam in
22 lines? shit, 16 was more my taste
I wanted to dumb it down a bit...
... but your verse beat me to the chase
I'll call your face my punching bag, I'm vicious. Fuck being humble
I'll send such a huge blow to your temple...
... the ones in India'll start to crumble
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So it's even, but SPuL came so much better with the lines I didn't quote compared to Lamps lines I didnt quote...

v/SPuL
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