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Old 10-13-06, 05:26 PM   #22
Stanza.
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Kid ya dirty so watch ya hygene or you'll end up dead
C'mon honestly man, is that a hat or something growin out ya head
...Um....kinda weak...
Kids a gay.. and ill prove it as i break his fuckin hips
This kid dont suck tits.. he just forever suckin on his lips
....Weak....
And yeah kid in this battle its on you that im smellin fear
N the onlything bigger then DTH winnin streak... is your left ear
.....Nice...
You get girls... huh who you kiddin, your face crusty like whoa
N the only time you get your freak on... is openin up a sideshow
...Aii...
Ima land so much punches on you, be prepared to take flight
Cause spul verse is like his barber...he cant line em up right
...Decent..
This kids a hindu fag... so go back to fuckin animal in your stall
N ill leave your face croocked like the frame hangin on your wall
..Good...
Lampejo fear this hoe? No... we know you only appearin dope
And I'll say congratulations on that tourny... from two years ago
/....lol....
Wack rhymes never comin up..they all beat up on the floor,why?
Cuz ya whole styles dragon...and it doesn't bring fire... ...or fly
...Nice!!!....
Despise this fag? Nah...just lookin at ya pics enuff to realize ya wack
..And you look a hell of alot like T.I....except T.I.'s black
/....Weak...
N kid's say i played you like zelda the way i box you around
while i take this look alike linkin park his ass underground
....Decent...
Kid i dont know why you requested this battle, its not like its fair
N your ass could only bring the pain if it pays you cab fare
...aii...

Overall you had like a few good bars and some nice bars but your overall verse was jus mainly Aii nuttin realy specail Xcept the lines on which i specified "Nice" on I feel that yu mostly had a filler verse

spul
Flip the picture upside down cuz those nostril's are alarmin'
And you'll find a replica of the hole, the US found Saddam in
...corny...
I'm doper then you, kid. I hate to sound nonchalent
But you're wack, F plus..
.. that's what ^^ your rhymes are graded in talent
concepts kinda played...
Fall back, kid, now listen, I'm serving knuckles for your lunches
So if you are what you eat.. check flash's next verse for my punches
...Damn Thats Nnice..
You're wack, you ain't gon win this league. I ain't playin' dude
So don't bother to peace out the puzzle..
... just realize thats ^^^^^^^^ that's what they sayin' to you
.....LOl funny...
Ain't no time for kiddy games, son... ain't got no time to waste
So while you rock, paper, scissors... I'll just throw them at your face
...Blah/....
22 lines? shit, 16 was more my taste
I wanted to dumb it down a bit...
... but your verse beat me to the chase
...Decent...
Flash is like a doulble-headed coin, bring either one, you kno I'll rip them
I'm sorry, am I on your bad side? I couldn't tell the difference
Damn....
I'll call your face my punching bag, I'm vicious. Fuck being humble
I'll send such a huge blow to your temple...
... the ones in India'll start to crumble
....LOL....damn....

overall i see you focused alot on wordplay which isnt bad bcuz you supplied solid punchez to go alonbg i feel that your verse overall was better than Lampejo. bcuz you came with more solid punchez and stronger pucnhez and better wordplay and a little less fillers so

my v/ Spul .

Nice battle should get some nice qoutes in the mag
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