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Old 10-14-06, 03:49 AM   #11
Implicit
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this beat is alright. nothing too spectacular. real simple. the piano is kinda annoying after a while though..

vocals on intro are too low..

flow on this is cool..emotion is pretty cool..i like how u switched it up..but the one thing that kinda holds this back is that you slur your words a lot..flow kinda chops up too much..lyrics are cool on this one too..good stuff


overall good song man..good emotion..lyrics are good..
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