Listenin'.. yeah i know about ya quality...so I aint gon say nothin'...
Hook: pretty kool...not much 2 say about that..
Verses...rhyme schem is nice, real nice...lyrics good...delivery is nice..flow pretty str8..
wasnt hindenburg a soldier?..or like a boat
lol
but i see you doing ya school teacher shit on the hook haa word hydrogen...
multis was working...
yeah quality i knw is bad n u cnt do much about it but still wuda sounded much mroe better with the quality..u shud re record this..
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can you rtf please:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...894#post3091894