See, I stopped smokin a long time ago, began to say raps viciously.
but now Kemp giving me Dimebags?.. This just bring back memories! Lol..
decent enough idea.. but you haven't worded this into a punch
You're a kind, sensitive guy, Son, full of passion and honest, dawg.
so yeah, I'd say you're pretty nice... when rapping is not involved!
rhyme is forced as hit
You'll never shine, just leave, none of your punchline's succeed.
ya bars are like 'books about throwing watches away'...
a waste of time to read!
nah
I'm not callin you broke just cause you ain't got alotta chips or nothin.
cause ya pockets ain't empty. .
....if you counting the lent as somethin!
ehh
Don't say you walk with trey pounds and who gon get clapped, geek.
cause the only Trey you handled. .
....was the dude you went against last week!
not bad
Drug pretender... walkin around like you smokin haze and piff again.
when the only way you 'burning trees'...
is setting flames to Timberlands!
nah.. i've seen this sort of thing done b4
You need practice the most, cause your keys are just bare, lame.
and only way 'Dimebags'll elevate'... is taking weed on an airplane!
decent concept.. but the way you've approached it just doesn't work for me.

vs.

Yo, faimes a herb that should eat my fists
dude aint the sharpest tool in the shed;
But he should go find it and cut his wrists
cool opener
This cat sucks at rappin,compared to my peers,his skills dissappear
I told him to juss drop his ugly 16, so he dumped his girl of 3 years
not bad
Quit flowin dogg u goin against the hardest
only people on Myspace accept u as an artist
blah
Cuz last time u was ballin I had u lookin the fool
Faime was laughin all the way to the bank;
becuz I told him to juss keep his fuckin cool
nah
To me the hospital is like Hollywood, they are kinda the same
I'll put Quotez in emergency,and leave only 15 minutes of Faime
i've seen this sort of thing used on him before
Make it look easy , when i blow out Quotez like old speakers
and leave S dot all scuffed up like a pair of your old sneakers
meh
How much do i have to take before this actor admit hes fake,
if i ever gave faime a shot, it would be followed by a wake
nah
Beat this kid till he resembles the trees in my dutch
Alot of blue, a little bit of purple, and all broken up
decent

v/ Sonny.