This is a decent track
the beat sounds like it some old school r&b song its mad hot i love this beat you gotta hook me up with this beat
Paranoid you came pretty came pretty nice on this.....I was quite suprized actually you upped yoru game..i think you should try to work on ur rhyme scheme and the way you say ur words cuz it doesn't seem like your putting to much emphasis in your rhymes
THE SHOVEL MAN LOL

you did a nice job on the hook.....some real smooth shit i was feeling that
Second dude Young REd or whatever wasn't that bad but he fell off hard in the last part of his verse dudes def. got some potential.