aight i feel u on sendin a message and all.Jus work on ya structure cuz sum didnt make sense.
"Why is that the poor don't have the same strife."-??U sayin all poor should feel tha same pain?maybe its jus me....

"Does the money bring evil, Into any mans heart. I don't think a rich man could ever part from the evil of greed."-rhymes & @ tha same tyme doesnt..jus work on it and Stay ^
-Avi