beat beginning isnt my type so far but whoa definately took another turn ...lol quality is a lil off but we all been there at one point or another...your attempt is good at the hook but to much and not really sure if it was at first im feeling ya message but got a lil lost in ya flow dragon sometimes ya flow pauses to make words fit are over the top get a lil more comfortable with ya words overall i liked it man holla at me we can fux with some shit

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