para u elevated word u dont sound so choppy n shit dubs n adlibs was coo lyrics was coo too gud job man hook comes in kinda lower then the verses needs to be upped dude comes in coo adlibs is cool flows went off a couple times delivery was coo second verse was coo too on ur verses u needa get more emotion tho try different things n shit hook is cool jus needs to be upped overall nice track man jus need keep workin on smoothin ya flow out