Yo this a good effort kid, I sort of feel what u trying to say ovah here... faith in hip hop, yeah... but you sort of step out of concept more than a few times, it be better if you narrowed the idea of this post down, then it would sound more interesting...

ok now, let my give you my usual... your rhymes were straight, but some kinda didn't rhyme thought... your flow was sort of on and off throught out the post, and your vocab... that was fine...

Peace man