Yeah! I read that keystyle, this shit is much better, it makes more sence, got better flow (though it still could have been smoother), wordplay and rhymes... I could even quote some...
"Mah soul's pure darkness,I dont even bleed red/"
"Our sisters get killed terribly,even thru birth/
Aint dat sumthin?One gotta die for 1 to live on dis Earth/"

yeah dawg this shit was tight... -1-