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Old 10-20-06, 10:52 AM   #2
TonyTone
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you sound tired but, ya voice....is still....sexy
i like this beat actually. not my steez but i like it. flow's on point, actually im feelin ya flow here better than any of ya other tracks. lyrics is simple, guessin its the writers block, but i like the rhyme scheme. got some internals goin on every once in a while. hook is simple, needs some layers. catchy tho. you should redo this track, n produce it like you want ppl to listen, not like your just tryna crack the writers block. woulda came out nice. pz
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