Listenin' like the lil pic u got btw, lol remember when we first talked ha we gotta do that again..

mic quality is diff u get sumin new?

hook is a good idea, wud be more catchy with a different way of delivering it..

yo voice is like an european version of foxy brown, work on the pronouncation and youll sound really marketable, flow is pretty good, lyrics aight still bumpable, hook is catchy jus ya pronounciation is puttin me off but like how you said "bump this", if you went to america and stayed there a lil more your pronounciation would be much better,

thats the only thing you need work on,

I dont think you need to hype more, i like ya laid back gangsta shit, so thats it, work on pronounciation and then you got it shorty, and maybe get a lil more confident, more energy but still keep it laid back..

you know tha deal

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