Voted For: SL.Valentino



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J-360?...More like J-180...
Your half tha shit you claim...
Thats half a faggit giving brains...
From what I see you in...
Is a faggit without a clue...
Running for tha dick...
Thats a faggit on the loose...
You say you don't freestyle...
Well Im calling you on....
I got my shit stirring smoke...
Like I'm calling a bong...shit
Your a fuck boy,
I'll Eat your food for Dinner...
Feed you more shells,
Than an Ol' Paso dinner...
When I picture you...
I see some talent ofcourse
Fuckin around wit Lil' Kids...
Like He's Malachi Yorke

I thought this was pretty terrible, but at least you attempted a few minor punches in that shit. Make your lines longer with a better overall strutre to your verse, its too choppy and all over the place, and throw a punch yo

VS

yo im here battlin my man
but everyone no he's my biggest fan
yo tino put in mind u stand in my way ur wat i'll ram
everyone will see u gat ur ass whooped by me on video cam
but ill tell u one thing man
u just lost dont come back or ill eat u up like a piece of ham

[b]You on the other hand, this aint no rap battle, im reading this shit thinking im reading a dr.seuss book or something. It was prolly the worst attempt at anything ive ever seen on this site ever, and thats being honest. you didnt throw one punch, nor did you even come close. I hope to god this battle was a joke and not you actually trying. good luck to you kid.

V/SL...........but it was a close one.

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