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Old 10-21-06, 11:33 AM   #7
DaTrusHurtz
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When Im Droppin These Bomb's There Only One Thing You Can Do
Turn The Other Cheek......... So I Can Make That One Black & Blue Too
a little too simple.. try to be more creative in the way ya use concepts cuz this was on the obvious side

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Mimesis wrote for you, now that turn the cheek line supposed to impress me?
Atleast you startin takin lines from joke sites instead of that joke of a textcee
alright, not bad but not great either
& your ghoswriters have you confused, it's got me amazed
Cuz this is Rap-Verse...... I think you were lookin for Copy & Paste
copy and paste idea is played but it was used well at least

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Datrus Was Right There Is Something Different About You And Its Sad..
Cuz, No One On Rapverse Is On Your Level... Cuz We Aren't Really That Bad..
level stuff is really played so this was ehh

Cocaine, u came a little too played and basic. Work on uppin' the creativity in the regular season and try to think of shit more fresh. Oneduh looked like if he had any better ideas he just felt like savin' them for later, but he got this fairly easily.

Vote - Oneduh
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