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Old 10-21-06, 03:27 PM   #10
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Datrus Was Right There Is Something Different About You And Its Sad..
Cuz, No One On Rapverse Is On Your Level... Cuz We Aren't Really That Bad..
^nah.just too bland.

When Im Droppin These Bomb's There Only One Thing You Can Do
Turn The Other Cheek......... So I Can Make That One Black & Blue Too
^pretty decent..juss a bit outdated on the turn the cheek concept.


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Mimesis wrote for you, now that turn the cheek line supposed to impress me?
Atleast you startin takin lines from joke sites instead of that joke of a textcee
^Roflmao.pretty good.made me laugh

& your ghoswriters have you confused, it's got me amazed
Cuz this is Rap-Verse...... I think you were lookin for Copy & Paste
^er.nah.wasnt feelin this...outdated concept..

Overall/-Oneduh got this...the joke site/joke textcee line got this...cocain had a pretty decent punch but juss lacked that wow factor..

V/-1,Duh!
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