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Old 10-22-06, 12:19 PM   #2
Young Fear
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I think
because the tears never come
when you can't even blink.

I didnt understand what you meant by that last part. Overall it was a nice piece of poetry. I like the depth of it and the way you got your point across. 7/10
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