http://www.community.rapverse.com/s...ad.php?t=236007
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feed on that

i really liked this you had some very impressive wordings and the way you put things into mysterious rhymings and internal/external was koo..you did a nice job with a storyline and also twisting it around from it coming really basic though the topic is played you came fairly original and were decent at it man props!.....keep at it witht his style you will get somewhere!..

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