eh not really feeling beat...its sounds striaight off a computer...but ya vocal quality is WAYYYYYYYYYYYYY better...flow is simple but good...I see u got ya pronounciation up...I am hearing every word clearly....hook sounds kinda like 50 cent an LL's joint bump this....same catch phrase an delivered almost exactly the same. Its decent tho...ok second verse u got same flow...u need to swtich up jus a lil, this beat is simple so u dont need alot of drastic flow swtiches jus subtle one to keep it enteresting, delivery was good, it was laidback but had intensity, u delivered it like u was talking shit to my face....good shit...lyrics was simple but effective...good joint def ya best shit sonically, keep it up fo real fo real....1

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