i hate when someone starts their track off with a gang of excuses. if your shit is gonna be sub par, don't record it.

on that note, here goes the listen:

beat just jumped off and that shit already sounds ABC as fuck. you shoulda been blabbin and hypin it up so i couldn't tell it was made on a fisher price keyboard. the hooks alright, needs more layers and more effort. your rhymesche runs off sometimes. damn i just can't get around it, this beat is jsut ASS, sounds liek carson produced it. sometimes it's hard to make out some of the words in the middle of your sentences cuz you mush some of your sylables togethe. if you wanna keep using the type of flow you're usin, you gotta work on that annunciation to compensate for that shitty mic.

btw, noise gate is your friend. learn what it is and learn how to use it.


btw, eventually you're gonna have to make a choice whether you wanna go with a more regular paced flow or the faster pace that you use, cuz randomly mixing em in the verses is starting to get annoying.

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