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Old 10-24-06, 02:12 PM   #5
Black Dragon
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hook - is strate for what it is especially fits da concept of track well

1st Verse - Shit is nice ya flow is nice real on beat........ya swagga is nice real cocky feelin it....but i feel that u could delivered it wit more energy.....

Hook - same as above

2nd Verse - flow is on point.......lyrics is strate but ya gotta up ya energy u sound to laidback for a track like this.....but ya lyrics is nice.....

Hook - same as above

3rd Verse - yea here we go this is da emotion i'm talkin bout......real cocky swagger man..../ Yvonne - yea yall both stepped up da energy.....nice....

Overall - dope beat.......nice lyrics...up yall emotion and it'd be dope.....

pz

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