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Old 10-24-06, 11:35 PM   #7
Wyte
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The King of wack since 04'.....a tough habit to break
You half pussy, so half assing completes your character traits
^this was an ok punch, i feel it you could have worded it better to make it harsher
kids wife doesnt mention em once I'm into the freak
your girl only tell me 'That tikuls' when I finger too deep
^meh i wasnt really feeling this one

vs.

Rather be half-pussy than cock, Tav likes to stroke-that..
I dont even gotta shatter his spine to prove hes broke-back..
^this could have been executed better, with different wording
You wrote-wack, tryna 'get between' my half-assed styles of trait..
Lucky I dont use full-ass effort, Tav gets 'between' that an kid aint str8..
^decent punch i liked it


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