beat is real laid back. i like that.

i guess that was the hook. a little too much though. i think you'd wanna make it a little more simple. adlibs are cool

verse 1 was alright. in the beginning your flow was a little strange. lyrics arent spectacular. nothing stood out. it was cool though.

hook again..too much.

verse 2 was okay. again..nothing too special


honestly it was a cool song. its something to jus chill and listen to while you wash your car or something. the lyrics are a little strange cause it doesnt seem to match the topic during certain parts. thats the only real problem i see.

and the typewriter kinda has nothing to do with the song. i like the sound of the song. it jus kinda doesnt come together for me.