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this was ok shawty, but you need to tweek ya flow alot. its straight if thats how you like it, but some parts were kinda choppy, and you should work on puttin i n some punches or makin ya rhyme scheme have some multies in it. but keep workin at it shawty..........
holla at me on my joints...links r in the sig
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