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this was ight, but some part were not really on point patna. You had a good flow overall but maybe make your verse more creative by puttin some multies or makin ya punches wittier, ya feel me? some bars i just didnt really get at all but....
Driven by my madness...Speak of what I Posess
I'll break a sword across your face
To leave your tongue in a mess...
^^^that was my favorite bar outta the whole joint....
holla at ya boy. on my OM's peep the sig shawty...
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