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i was feelin this mah dude. there was some real talk in there , that i actually had to deal wit. but you had a good flow and some decent multies in there. only thing i would say is work on your vocab...not sayin use words that are longer than the lines at the DMV, but just try to make your verse more interesting ya dig?
A lyrical demon, satan's child and verbal menace/
with a mind with no boundaries or visible limits/
^^^I was feelin ya last bar the most, i just liked it alot for some reason.
Hit me back on my shit the lnks are in the sig mah dude.......
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