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Old 10-26-06, 11:33 PM   #19
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ahha
wuddup yv
umm
aiight the beat...kinda simple? not really feelin it
the chorus. pretty cool kinda catchy.
aiight ur verse comes in. kinda laid back,
sounds like u were secretly recording while ur parent were sleepin or somethin
pretty cool tho
chorus again. catchy
2nd verse. this ones alot better. better flow
overall pretty decent track
ur getting better.
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