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Old 10-27-06, 01:01 AM   #13
Te Ora
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No bother throwing a big one, a small hit is all I need,
'Cause the only kids hooked on 'Phonics..
.................................still gotta learn how to read.
yea, alright
^ Played and nonsence lines? Kid is far from near the mark,
So I'll kill Kenny more than the bastards from South Park.
lol.. nice

vs.

You're a cowherd, need proof that u a stink bitch
Just readin those first 2lines....I Red Bull shit
i've never read dudes battles but i'd be very suprised if this wasn't played
Love to see things from your view,
But I cant get my head that far up my ass
So someday u'll find yaself...then wish ya hadn't dont that!!!
ehh nah.. wording completley killed it for me. it doesn't rhyme, the 3 line shit isn't working and you put "dont" instead of "done". you should've really looked over this a bit more before posting

v/ Red Bull. hit up me vs lord of pens dudes.
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