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Old 10-27-06, 06:00 AM   #15
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No bother throwing a big one, a small hit is all I need,
'Cause the only kids hooked on 'Phonics..
.................................still gotta learn how to read.
--I've seen hooked on phonics punches before but this works as a nameplay as well plus it was funny.
Played and nonsence lines? Kid is far from near the mark,
So I'll kill Kenny more than the bastards from South Park.
--the setup was good but i felt the wording was bad in the punch.

vs

You're a cowherd, need proof that u a stink bitch
Just readin those first 2lines....I Red Bull shit
--nah, i really wasnt feeling this
Love to see things from your view,
But I cant get my head that far up my ass
So someday u'll find yaself...then wish ya hadn't dont that!!!
--lol...did you text JOKE to 35050, for the joke of the day......WACK

vote bull
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