lord of pens

Wow yo, we saw this hot chick comin down the strip,
Te said it was his girl, we saw double n' said huh?...you Te? Ora bitch?

^^aight cool concept even if it has been done...it kinda stretched tho..like the idea

It always leaves us a question lookin at ya name, what's worse is,
Right now we could all ex'it<---but you should perform that to all ur verses,

^^aight decent...i just dont like the set up...cuz i was expecting a name play but ok punch


te ora

it's blasphemous.. i'll put athiest to his face, smother his mug
and Godamn use the Lords name in vain..
when i leave Pens covered in blood.

^^ this was nice ...felt the set up lead into the punch..smooth


flipping lines from dudes you just lost to.. that shit be a disgrace
if you took enough punches from Brown.. I'll hit you Whitney to the face

^ aight both ways. cuz if your saying 'wit knee to the face' seems kinda forced but its aight...but if your not lol..its still an ok line...both ways its decent ..dont u wish her name was whitneys lol

i liked te ora had one really nice line...and one decent line compared to lord's 2 decent lines


vote-te ora

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