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Old 10-27-06, 04:58 PM   #9
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Rofl.

t's blasphemous.. i'll put athiest to his face, smother his mug
and Godamn use the Lords name in vain..
when i leave Pens covered in blood.
alright nameplay, pretty good diss here.
flipping lines from dudes you just lost to.. that shit be a disgrace
if you took enough punches from Brown.. I'll hit you Whitney to the face
lol cool wordplay and nice flip on what he done already.

vs.

Wow yo, we saw this hot chick comin down the strip,
Te said it was his girl, we saw double n' said huh?...you Te? Ora bitch?
Too obvious and not to mention it was done, pretty much the same way before
It always leaves us a question lookin at ya name, what's worse is,
Right now we could all ex'it<---but you should perform that to all ur verses,
Meh, there is too many punches like this for this to be considered originial or witty.

Im gonna go with Te, for coming a lil harder with the lines and nameplays. Also the second lines were good for a feeding diss and explaining how its been used.

V. Te Ora
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